Awesome. Love it. I've been on a mafia kick ever since I watched "American Gangster" and I checked my Devi-watch. Fav.

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haha thanks buddy ^^ and thanks for the fav too

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im a puppy dipped in chocolate, im fun to play with and i taste good

I like the blood stain and high graphics of it. As I often say, it is my childhood dream to transform into a comic book character.

The message is good too. You made an interesting attempt with the font, I like people who experiment in such ways, since font is something that appeals to me as well, but perhaps you could refine that a bit more to make the image more polished. The font is black and red, while the image is only white and red -- think about the balance there as well. I'm not an expert at all or pushy but maybe a bit of black in the art manip or keep the text all black but add an outline of red to shot if you want to enhance it (or some other way to enhance it). I think a boarder might add to it or wider margins.

But those are humble suggestions, I am pleased and honored in general to see what people's minds come up with.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

Of course.

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thank you for your suggestions i will try and experiment on what you have told me and see what happens

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im a puppy dipped in chocolate, im fun to play with and i taste good

Cool, I've already added your work to the artist's comments and my shoutboard.

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はじめまして! _{Artist, Writer/Poet, Photographer, traditional medium mostly, anime, sci-fi and the bizarre.}

thanks i feel honoured ^^

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im a puppy dipped in chocolate, im fun to play with and i taste good